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Well, anyone who can stick trepidation into a poem and not have it stick out like a sore thumb is going to be a top class writer one day. I ...

Hmm.. just a quick tidbit, I cant see anything wrong with it so I will lace my response with lovely praise for the author.I agree i did feel bad for ...

I agree with previous posts before me: simplistic and peaceful are just 2 words i can use to describe this. You captured exactly what someone,before they fall asleep, wants to ...

I think what makes a poem is your ability to sync words and phrases so that they rhyme and make sense. You did that perfectly: you set they scene, carved ...

:D I'm terribly sorry, but i don't think you should do ANYTHING to this. Its absolutely perfect just the way it is, it is whimsical but also carries a subliminal ...

I don't know what to say, you obviously have a great talent for poetry. When I read it, i instinctively looked for an age, expecting to see 16-18.I agree the ...

Hey its think again, tired of long posts so ill just do point forms =): 1.) Good use of imagery again, you captured the innocence of the whale.And your comparison ...

Poetry is not black and white, please remember poetic license allows the poet some degree of alteration in both meaning and pronunciation. So tharlam is right to use shriners, even ...

truly epic piece, if i was you i would frame it,laminate it. Keep it safe until its published and i can purchase it =). It was strides ahead of most ...

Hmm, it was indeed a very powerful piece. particularly loved "Rested in the ether among the stars, ". use of imagery helps us to visualize the peaceful scene you are ...

well,it didn't jump out at me as being amazing until the second reading (leave me alone i just woke up *hiss*). Even though it didnt rhyme your choice of words ...

first off, i thought it was very well written, with no real mistakes that i could spot with a glance. My only thing is its length, I know you may ...

first off im going to give praise where praise is due :) . to me it was a nice poem, that could become great, your writing style and the poem ...

all in all it was a very moving piece, from the very beginning i felt the mood of it, i really understood what you were trying to put across. it ...

i agree with my predecessors, that was a very powerful,very moving piece. i think you really hit home on that one, i am looking forward to reading more of your ...